Thursday, 12 April 2018

current events

    Current Events
       We are learning to retell what we read




Who.. is involved in this event

Silver Ferns

What.. happened
They are in the semi final.

Where… did it happen

It happened commonwealth games
When...did it happen
It happened Yesterday 11th of April.
Why… did it happen?
To see which team will go into the finals

How… did the event start

It start of great silver ferns were shooting lots and lots of goals but sadly England was behind
Perspectives… Who is involved in the event and what do they think about it -
e.g. the robber is angry that he didn’t get the money he needed to buy food.  The old lady is upset that her money was almost stolen, she needed it.

Silver Ferns are now in the semi final with Australian since they won against England it was 54-45 to the Silver ferns.I was a really hard game sadly England lost.Now Silver ferns are going to face Australian.Who will win and walk away with the trophy but who will lose and walk away with nothing.If you want to see what happens next please leave a comment below.



Tuesday, 10 April 2018

Role Model.


Role model what is a role model well role model  is person that you look up to.I look up to my Bro Blessing.He is the best bro every I wouldn't want any other bother.

Monday, 9 April 2018

Crunchie



Chocolate Challenge


Tehillah- Crunchie is yum because it is full of flavor .If you eat
Crunchie you will have the best feeling ever. I have tasted it.It
tasted like a mouth full of yumminess.The ingredients they have
will make you fell in love with crunchie.


Maria Ingredients  - Crunchie has a lot of ingredients in. It has
golden hokey pokey  honeycomb covered in cadbury milk
chocolate. It’s has 931kg of energy , 7.5g 11% 14.9% fat and the
Sugar 31.4g 35% 62.8g. The Chocolate makes you happy if you
are feeling sad .


Ayla- Crunchie has all the ingredients .Chocolate Covered
Honeycomb Crunchie bars based on the Cadbury Crunchie
candy bar, these gorgeous chocolate treats contain only 6
ingredients and are gluten-free, vegan and fabulously good.

I think Picnic has a lot yummy ingredients.They make their chocolate so yummy that you will be dreaming about it in bed.It was so hard to compete with there chocolate since people love picnic even I love picnic.But here is something you don’t know about Picnic .Picnic make you sick if you are Allergic to peanuts so that is why you shouldn't buy picnic






Friday, 6 April 2018

Problem 2


I have learn so much because of this work .Please leave a comment.

Problem 1


W.A.L.T-Illustrate how we solve each problem.

Here is what I have learned today.It was so hard to find out the Answer but at the end I figured it out.

Wednesday, 4 April 2018

Justifying an argument

Justifying an argument
WALT: justify our ideas using conjunctions

Author A:
I strongly believe that students need school uniforms. Students need school uniforms because they
show people what school they go to. All of the students look tidy because they are in the same school
and it’s like free advertising because when people see the uniform they think of the school. So yeah,
school uniforms are good.


Author B:
I firmly believe that school uniforms should be banned. School uniforms are costly and they put a lot
of pressure on the student’s caregivers. Children need new school uniforms every time they grow
and change schools. With some items of clothing costing a hundred dollars or more, the cost involved
in buying a new school uniform is huge! It is particularly difficult for families with two or more
students, as it is hard enough to feed a large family let alone buy an expensive school uniform every
year for each child. School uniforms should be banned for the benefit of parents everywhere!


Which argument do you think is stronger? Author B: because this has given us more information.


What vocabulary do the authors use that you would like to steal? Pressure , involve , difficult , and
enough.


What did you like about the paragraphs?I loved that they used lots of information about why we
don’t did uniform and why we need uniform


What do you think the authors could improve on?They could put pictures up next to the writing
.I think that Author A could improve their writing and use more information.


Highlight the signposts (topic sentences) the authors use in purple.
I strongly believe that students need school uniforms. Students need school uniforms because they
show people what school they go to.


Highlight the conjunctions or connecting words (for, because, and, but, as…) that the authors use
in blue.



Wednesday, 28 March 2018

Angles Angles Angles Part 2


Today I had to finished all my work and I did but I won't have done it with out my friends Trendy she helped me understand the problem.Please leave a comment